I heard from L that you would come to Shanghai soon,we are all looking forward to see you.However,it’s a pity that you will only spend one week here.Could you stay for longer time?L wants to climbing hills,see the views,and count starts with you.So it would be much better if you can stay for two weeks.Will it delay your work if you entend your holiday?Otherwsie L can not bear to see you leave.L has finished translation of your resume,but I heard that her elder brother disapproves of your emigration to Shanghai.I think you should discuss with L about this matter.
Hope everything goes well in your journey.
翻得太仓促了.