3-5分,不会超过5的,请原谅我的直率.
The different categories pour （per?poor?） families in Australia
There are a great number of families in poverty in the world,also in the Australia (also...X,especially in Australia).According (X,should be in the beginning )to the table,we can know what(omit) the difference is between the families.(the differences between these types of families.)
以下实在太多错了,一些语法错去问老师吧,另外学术写作要注意：不要缩写.
你还有很长的路要走,请原谅我的直率.
一些建议,1,学好基础语法
2,看Mark Morgan的写作书,千万不要再看中国人写的书