Question

（英文）一篇记叙一件过去的发生故事

Answer 1

I was visited Australia last year.was不要

I like the zoo very much--like用liked,或者enjoyed更好一点

Sach as koala,kangaroo,snack and so on---sach是such

I touched the kangaroo--the改成a比较好,前面没有特指过