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I am a furniture designer. I like my job. It brings a lot of fun and challenge for me. Though it can be frustrating sometimes, I still feel excited at work, especially when new and innovative products are designed by me. I feel satisfied and worthy when people buy the stuff I designed. These house products will enter thousands of families, making people's lives more convenient and beautiful. Knowing that my job could change people's living environment, I feel powerful and am determined to work harder and design more and better products for society.
不要滥用 would.表示你的习惯状态或行为 应该用一般现在时.最后一句用could表示委婉、谦虚.