有错误的哈~
1. A取决于B的表达是A is conditioned on B.所以这里介词用on,而不是by.
2. 然后Success不是特指某个成功,而是泛指成功的话就不用加the了.
3. effort表示泛指的努力,同样不需要加s.
4. 但是不明白您后面那个string attached是想要表达什么意思.如果是附带条件的意思话最好加个s.
这样全句就变成
Success is conditioned on efforts with few strings attached.
追问补充后面想表达的意思哈~