1.建议信(A Letter of Suggestion)
express your wish to be a volunteer. Dear Wang Qishan,
I am a senior in Peking University. The 2008 Beijing Olympic Games is coming in two years. After watching the 2004 Athens Olympic Games, I can not help writing to you.
First of all, here is my suggestion for the preparation work of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games. The construction work of the sports building must be completed in time according to the contract. In Athens, the swimming stadium was not accomplished in time so that the event had to be held in the open air, which has brought negative effect on the performance of athletes. In one word, to protect the international image of China and ensure the Olympic competition, we must finish our preparation work well and in time.
Last but not least important, I want to express my wish to be a volunteer. In the first place, it is the duty of every Chinese to do his bit for the 2008 Olympic Games. In the second place, I have a good command of foreign languages. I can speak
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A suggestion to my English teacher
My English teacher is the most hard-working(最高级+复合形容词的运用,不错!) teacher I have ever seen.（定语从句,可以尝试用同位语哦,比如the elegant lady, my English teacher, is the most …） During her class, she tells us all the knowledge she knows. She also answers our questions as possibly as she can.(这句前可以用现在分词作状语,Being patient, she also…) With the help of my teacher, my English improves a lot.
However, she is so strict with us that everyone is scared to talk to her. (so …that…结构用的好!) So I suggest that my teacher should be good-tempered to us. Besides (除了…的表达方法?)to prepare the lessons, she is too tired. A good rest is necessary.
I hope our teacher may totally change after seeing these suggestions, (这里的suggestion要注意不能用复数,前文也只能提及一个建议,多拓展.比如 If my teacher is good-tempered, it is beneficial not only to her health, but also to her popularity)
By Wang Lin
A suggestion to my physics teacher
Physics is my favourite subject. Nonetheless I always fall asleep when I am having physics lessons. Because it is so boring that I can’t help sleeping. Not only me but also my classmates do other things during the class. So I am going to give a suggestion to my physics teacher: to make the class more interesting in order to attracts students. They will listen to the teacher more carefully than before and make progress. I really hope I can do better.
Ø 内容充实,先说明提出建议的原因,自然地过度到建议.结尾稍显单薄.可再补充些（I sincerely hope that my physician teacher can take my advice so that I can do better in class.）
By Gao Ruilin
A suggestion to my politics teacher
With the time passing by and the development of modern science and technology, (第一句和文章并无大关系,放在这里略显牵强) politics is more and more important today. However, I also have a suggestion to my politics teacher. (also放在这里合适吗?)We are Grade Nine students and we are really busy now.(可用can词组,we are Grade Nine students so that we can’t help but be busy with our lessons now.) Should we don’t read news every day? (情态动词不可以和助动词放在一起哦!)It takes me much time and I can’t study on other subjects better.(这两句可以换种说法,informative as reading news is, it takes me too much time and I am not able to focus on other subjects.) In addition, I know how important the politics is (感叹句作宾语从句,不错!) and I will review the current (可以说recent) events. And I hope teacher will accept my suggestion.
By Sun Bowen
I want (to) give my English teacher a suggestion. You always give us a lot of exercise for homework, but you always says our exercise is too little. I will do these exercise try my best(try my best 可改成with my great efforts). I will learn English the hardest (harder and harder). I will Make my grades up. (和前一句可合并,so as to make progress in English.) I want to be good at this subject. And get a good performance in Senior high school entrance examination.
Ø 题目要求是写我给老师的建议,但是除了第一句涉及到了建议外,其余都在讲我要如何提高英语成绩,跑了题.千万要仔细审题!
By Luo Qikai
A suggestion to my physics teacher
No one is perfect,everyone must be make a lot of mistakes,including my physics teacher. (句与句之间要有连接词!可改成Everybody cannot be free from mistake. My physics teacher is without exception. )
She has a great number of errors. For example,when we have a lesson with her,she always forget that she talks about what (可用宾语从句forget what she talks about), then she needs some seconds to back to her title at first. (need做实义动词要加s, to review her title) It waists too much time.
But I have to admit that she is beautiful and gentle, she is proud of me and sure (appreciate) my ability. I have her to thank for my success. (I owe my success to her a lot.) I must become better (后面加上in return,作为报答),at the same time,I hope that she corrects her mistakes.
It that she tell me ‘time is your friend,if you don’t value it enough,it can be the worst enemy. (最后一句的用意是什么呢?)