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didn’t have water. Therefore , some people don’t turn the tap off at once after using it. Some people don’t However
realize they wash them in the shower too long. Some even throw away bottles full in water. As
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middle school students, we should make great efforts to save water. On one hand, every single
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1. that 改为which，在定语从句中介词后面的关系代词不可以用that。
2. didn’t改为don’t，这里if引导的是真实条件句，这个上下文都是用一般现在时的。
3. Therefore改为However， therefore意为因此，通过上下文可知前后应为转折关系。
4. them改为themselves，wash themselves洗他们自己。
5. in改为of，短语be full of 固定搭配。
6. save改为saving，save water 做主语，改用ing形式，every single person’s 做它的逻辑主语。
7. significance改为significant，这里做表语，该用形容词。
8. 加定冠词the， on the other hand固定短语搭配。
9. watering改为water，use sth to do sth的结构，其中we just used做定语从句修饰water。
10. tooth改为teeth，该用复数形式。