Question

请帮忙修改英语演讲稿.My Dream of Life.

Answer 1

前面很不错,应该没有毛病,在后面的结语方面,应向开头一样好,结尾写好些绝对是一篇好文章,this is my advice ,wish your article can climb the higher floor!（I am a student in a middle shool ,the age is very young than you,that must be have many wrongs in this words,please give me some advice,too.And I will take your advice to make my English best than yesterday.Very thanks for you!）