从高一的教学要求来看,
第一篇24分,句子结构与语法略有些水平,但是观点阐述稍微有点不太清晰,条理略有欠缺.
第二篇22分,虽然条理清晰,但是句子结构与用词比较单调,不容易拿高分.
两篇作文都略有语法错误,不过尚不影响大局.
高一作文请打分.30分制第一篇：Failure Is The Mother OF The SucceessWe midd
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