Question

请检查这篇英语作文的语法,I like looking out the window in my room.I miss

Answer 1

1.第三行的My mother就两个单词放在那里.

2.I was felt that I would never obtain his love...将was 去掉.I felt that...

3.that my life was incomplet,这句前面说我觉得我永远不会得到他的爱,后面改为,生命永远也不会完整,这样更通顺.改为:that my life would never be complete.

4.my mother has cleaned up all the doubts and worries which were...这句时态前面为现在完成时后面为一般过去时,时态一致更好,改为.which have been stucked in my hearts all the time