This winter holiday I have been to BeiJing for a travel. it was a great journey! we have went to see the Imperial Palace and the great wall and them let me feel that I was proud to be a Chinese.
The Imperial Palace noted the history. there were many antiques which we could espy the great culture .
From the great wall,it was a well-known wonder in the world.it is made of big stones which was too heavy to bring even uesing it to buil a construction of ruggedization. what a great grandeur!
翻译：
这个暑假我去了北京旅游.这是一个伟大的旅程!我们去参观了故宫和长城,他们让我觉得我很自豪作为一个中国人.
故宫的历史.有许多古董,我们可以看到文化的伟大.
从长城,它是世界著名的奇迹是由大的石头太重,甚至利用它建立带结构加固.真是个好宏伟
My traveling plan
I hope to go on a trip to Beijing,but my mother always tells me "you can't".She thinks I am too young to go to Beijing,and I am too busy at school.This term is over,To my surprise,my mother will take me to Beijing.I am very excited!Then I have a traveing plan for this trip:firstly I will go to the tian'anmen square,I will take many pictures,then I am going to the palace museum,I can see many old builds there.secondly,I am goingto the wangfujing street,we will buy many things,for example,foods,clothes and some books.then I will go home. I think I will have a great trip to Beijing
翻译：
我的旅行计划
我希望去北京旅游,但是我的妈妈总是告诉我“你不行”.她认为我太年轻,去北京,和我在学校太忙了.这学期已经结束,让我惊讶的是,我妈妈会带我去北京.我很兴奋!然后我有一个旅游计划这次旅行：首先我要去天安门广场,我会拍很多照片,然后我要去故宫博物馆,在那里我可以看见许多旧的基础.其次,我去王府井大街,我们会买很多东西,例如,食物,衣服,有些书我会回家.我想我将有一个伟大的北京之旅
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