14号下第一场雪的时候你在XX吗?
were you in XX when It snowed the first time of this year ? 改为：
Were you in XX when it was snowing for the first time of this year?
it后用进行时,你这里是指“过去正在下雪的时候”.有首歌就叫做：
"Where Were You When I Was Falling In Love"
for the first time - 第一次 （for 不要少）
what a beautiful snow 改为：
What beautiful snow! 或：
How beautiful the snow is! （snow是不可数名词）
不明白可继续提问.
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