修改一段英文i will share with y

修改一段英文i will share with you a wonderful travel. i went to Sh

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i will share with you a wonderful travel. i went to Shenyang last year. the weather was good and filled with fresh air. my favorite place was Jin Palace there. it was set up in 1625 and covers the area of 60,000 square meters and has more than 90 buildings. i like those buildings very much, for they looks so magnificant. i like the dessert there very much,too. they are so tasteful. although the trip made me very tired, i enjoyed it as well as happy and delight.do you like my trip? and don't you think it was wonderful? can you talk about your experience of the travel?