求一篇travel alone or not为题的英语作文

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  • Traveling Alone Or Traveling With A Companion(这里的travel兼有动词的功能,要用其动名词,下同)

    Nowadays,a lot of people have much spare time to do something(which省去) they like,such as traveling,and different people have different ways of traveling(Talking about the manner of traveling,it's different people to people是病句,且manners 用在这里也不合适,改为ways).Some people like traveling alone,and some people like traveling with a companion.

    Compared with traveling alone,traveling with a companion is safty(compared with句型不能用比较级).Hower(此处用hower更贴切) traveling alone also has advantages(用复数) of its own.You may go anywhere(此处用anywhere更符合句意 ) you want to go and it depends on (benifit for 改为depends on )your own thinking.