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My school was in the west end of city.Some of my 【classmates】take a bus to school because it is rather 【far或faraway】from their home.
It takes us half an hour to get to school on 【去掉the】foot.I usually ride a bicycle to school.But 【sometimes】on a fine day,I walk 【加入to】school.The other day a friend of mine 【showed】me a new short cut to school.The main school building has three stories 【and】all the classrooms are in it.We have a very large playground and 【加入a】nice gymnasium.【Thanks】to these wonderful athletic facilities,the students enjoy sports very much.It makes our teachers 【happy】.