某海外学校举办英语训练营,开设了以下课程:园艺(gardening),烹饪(cooking),防身术(self-defe

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  • Dear sir /madam,

    I am very glad that your school will hold the English summer camp which contains many courses, such as gardening, cooking, self-defense, nursing and so on.

    I want to register to attend a course about gardening because I have liked flowers, grasses etc since I was a little child. I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature. For one thing, I want to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college. For another, I can realize the bitterness of the gardeners and treasure plants much more consequently. What‘s more, after graduation, I plan to devote my life to cultivate flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state, attracting more foreigners to come to visit it.

    Yours,

    Li Hua

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    本文属于应用文写作,要求写一封申请信,报名参加一项课程。使用第三人称和一般现在时。要点:1. 你感兴趣的课程:园艺;2.希这个课程让我了解到更多与园艺有关的知识。3.为什么想学这些内容:期望园艺能够帮助我在大学里的专业学的更好,而且未来自己也想从事于园艺有关的事业;

    写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。

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    而且,毕业以后,我计划把我的时间花在种植花草,让我们的祖国更加漂亮吸引更多的人来参观。

    ①[What‘s more, after graduation, I plan to devote my life to cultivate flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state, attracting more foreigners to come to visit it.

    ②What‘s more, after graduation, I plan to devote my life to cultivate flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state to attract more foreigners to come to visit it.