thanks (to) someone who ever hurt me,(they) (made) me (sorrowful) and sad.Because it makes me (become) strong!
错误的用括号都圈出来了,我大致可以知道你的意思是：谢谢那些伤害过我的人,他们让我失落伤心,同时也让我变得坚强.
这样写会更合适一些：Thanks to those who ever hurt me . They made me sorrowful and sad some time , but I couldn't be strong without them .
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