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Eminem, one of the most famous American rappers,has improved that the white can also involve in the black men rap world and make it so well. His rap type is hardcore.His rebellious character make him not only loved by Amerian teenagers,but also be under fire in the public opinion. the number of the awards that Eminem has gotten is on the third place in the history,only after Madonna and Peter Gabriel.
major achivements: nine times won the grammy
The 75th Oscar for best film theme song award
21st century the world's highest-selling album for ten years