英语口语短文,自己写了一点抄了一些,帮我改错!

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  • 好了,基本完成了.首先说一下,我不是很好理解你这用sexy在表达什么.括号里是比较本地的表达方式.语法全部查完了,但是我真的完全不能理解你下办文再阐述什么.可能的话把中文给我我能教你怎么表达.你是不是想表达appealing呢?有时候从句都是很不必要的,没有太复杂的限制修饰时我自己会避免用从句.

    Keep sexy

    Today (I want to/wanna) talk about (sexiness/sex appeal).What is sexy (do you think/to you)?(About this question/On this issue),different people (may) have different answers.Some (people/of them) may say that sexy is as sexy does.But (on my opinion/to me),sexiness is (a/some) kind of (life attitude and spirit /temperament/profile/style).

    Many people think that sexiness (equals perfect looks/is good appearance),(Fashionable/fashion) (dress/dressing) or (open manner/being wild).But these Often sexiness is worn unknowingly by the truly sexy.The (truly/real) sexy may be their confident walk.It may be a look they give you.It may be (the way/how) they smile.It may be a look they give you.It may be a sexy mind.(I have often found/I can always find) the unassuming prove to be truly sexy which catches you unawares and goes beyond the superficial.

    Some (female/women) (fashion) stars are famous (as/for) the world’s (sexiest/hottest) women,(such as/like) Angelina Jolie and Jessica Alba.(Certainly/Truly),they have (pretty/perfect) appearances.But I think their (sexiness/appealingness) comes from their unique characters.(There is someone who/some woman) also has (a) beautiful face but we don’t (think she’s sexy/consider she is the sexy one).On the contrary,(someone/one)’s appearance are ordinary but her (temperament?/style) is sexy.

    In a word,sexiness didn’t equals beauty.It’s a special life style.My slogan is Life is a span.So let’s keep sexy.