On Monday afternoon , our class together with Class 6 held a competitive basketball match .
The match lasted 40 minutes with two halves.And the last score was 60:56.That is to say , our team had a narrow defeat, which excited us very much . Our team made great dfforts in it despite unimaginable difficulty .Our team never defeated the team of Class 6 before .Besides , one of our members got a serious cold. Our classmates got together to cheer up our team all the time .The moment our team met with difficulty , we stood out .So we competed as a whole , which was the key to our victory.
This match was over in a friendly and exciting atmosphere .Our headteacher congratulated us on our winning , adding that “union ” and “courage” contributed to our success.
In a nutshell , this basketball match inspires us a lot and we will continue to devote ourselves to constructing our best class.
本篇书面表达非常贴近学生在校生活实际，话题内容涉及校内活动，学生有话可说。同时能够让学生充分运用所学知识，表达自己的思想。
1.注意几个关键信息和特点：
A. 本篇书面表达运用常见的直接要点提示类型，要点明确清楚，便于学生组织文章，理清脉络。
B．三个方面的要点有一定的开放性，但表达时要注意方向性和限制性，不能过多。