1.第一题就不会.= = 应该是:news不可数,不能用系动词are.
2.idea不加s;to build a primary school
3.shall→will 这个不知道对不对 = =
4.How lovely hair you have had!hair不可数,后有you have的话前面就要用how.
5.moved to move to someplace 固定搭配.
6.potatos tomatos 靠语感的.= =
7.such a 同上.= =
8.never give;much advice never+动词原形；advice不可数
9.bought two equipments immediatly very fast 修饰动词
10.will be developed 语感.= =
11.too去掉；preparations不加s little表否定所以不加s
12.There is 就近一致.
13.Every man has been Every后加单数.
14.要么删afford to要么删pay for 两个重复了.