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  • Dear Classmates.

    I am writing to inform you that a charity sale will be held by our class on January 3,2014 in our campus.

    Now,let me introduce the detailed information about the charity sale to you.To begin with,the aim of holding the charity sale is to assist the children in the remote area who can not go to school because they cannot afford the tuition .What’s more ,you can sale your books,clothes and other things that are not needed any more.All the money raised from the activity will be used to help the children return to school.

    On behalf of all the poor children,I'd like to express thanks to you and your active participation will be appreciated.

    Yours sincerely ,

    Li Ming

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