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Dear Tom,
Although I'm 16 years old,(去掉but) my father still treats me as a careless children.He doesn't value my opinions.
He is very strict with me and often punishes me (for) leaving things lying around in the house (while) he did this all (加入the) time.I think he fails to set an example (to) me to follow.But he often says:"(Do) as I say ,not as I do ."
(Even) worse,he points out my past mistakes to guests,making me feel (hurt) .I love my father,but I can't bear what he does.I have (去掉been) tried many times to talk with him (but) he never listens.Please help me .