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  • 通篇来看,这偏文章大部分问题出现在语句顺序不符合日常说法,个别的词汇用的不是很准确,我这里大致改了一下,希望对你能有所帮助,仅供参考:

    This is a story of a young man named Boyde Bridges who lived in New Zealand one hundred and forty years ago.

    Boyde sailed from England to New Zealand to seek his fortune in 1858.His wealthy father had given him a large sum of money to buy a farm so that he could live a comfortable and prosperous english landed gentry life in a far-off land.

    However,life in the colonies was very hard and rough.Since Bridges was young and inexperienced,he quickly fell down with the wrong company.and before long,most of his money was gone.

    Even though,Bridges had made one friend,a man called Bill Jones,who worked as an appearance of blacksmith.Bill was an honest,hard-working fellow and he was quite different in character from Boyde.

    Nevertheless,the two became friends.