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My hobby
Everybody has his own hobbies.So do I.My hobby is playing badmintion.I have learnt and played badminton for three years.
It's different from other sports.when you play it you will fell vey excited.That 's why I like it.
I play it every sunday with my friends who like badminton,too.
Also,I like to watch the TV shows about badminton.I enjoy the excitement the game brings to my life.
Above all, playing badminton can make me physically fit and mentally strong. The win and loss of the game make me laugh and cry and let me know that life is wonderful.
I like playing badminton!
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