Recently,a debate about obeying school rules has been sparked.
First and foremost,school rules play a leading role in helping students conduct themselves.As society develops,more and more teenagers like to follow the fashion,they dye hair,and dress themsevels in a strange way,which is not socially acceptble.So apprantly,obeying school rules will be a good way to help out.And what's more,as we think we are matural enough to manage things individually,we ,of course,should treat it our duty to obey it.
觉得简单的话就不用改了,觉得难的话,就下面这个：
Recently,a debate about obeying school rules has been sparked.
Firstly,school rules play an important role in helping students to behave well.As society develops,more and more teenagers like to follow the fashion,they dye hair,and dresses themsevels in a strange way.So obviously,obeying school rules will be a good way to help out.And what's more,as we think we are matural enough to manage things independently,we ,of course,should treat it our duty to obey it.