The Republic of Ireland,its capital is Dublin,lies just to the west of the UK.
（改为whose capital is Dublin)
It has a population of more than 4 million and cover an area of more than 70,000 square kilometers.
（改为covers an area of)
Everywhere you look for are castles and historical places.
（改为Everywhere you look at)
It has a mildly sea climate.（改为It has a mild sea climate.)
That is not too cold in winter and not too hot in summer.
（改为It is not too cold)
There are two official languages in Ireland:Irish,which is a national language,or English,which is the language of the majority of the population.
（改为,and English,)
Ireland is really attractive with a lot of people.
（改为attractive to a lot of people)
So if you had a chance to come here,you are sure have a good time.
（改为So if you have a chance
you are sure to have a good time)
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