Question

英语改错We took part in an exciting activityin January 16th ,200

Answer 1

第2行是不是楼主打错字了?有两个错误啊!

1.in → on

2.Olympic → Olympics

are → were

3.exciting → excited

4.去掉第2个the（广场前面无the）

5.up → out

6.answering → answered

7.去掉who

8.more和Beijing中间加入about

9.However → Besides/Furthermore/Moreover(另外/而且)

10.is和really中间加入a