①Tomorrow is （the New Year's Day)
②第二句So my family is going to go to my grandma s pay new year call 改成So my family is going to vist my grandpa 较好
③my grandma to cook a lot of food 语法问题 My grandma is going to cook a lot of food
④we have so many meat food肉不可数,不能用many 用much
其他的 没什么问题了 你自己再看下