Most students do not like their school uniform.However,I think we should wear an uniform as(as改为because) it makes students feel like they belong to their school.Everyone looks the same when they are wearing their uniform,that(that改为which) means no one is better or less well-dressed then(then改为than) anyone else.Besides,uniforms are practically(practically改为practical) and comfortable.It is also easy(easy改为easier) in the mornings to get up because you have to make a decision of(去掉of) what to wear.Getting dresssing is made(去掉made) simple:you(加上can) always wear the same thing to school.Uniforms mean that students do not need to feel like unrelated individual.Uniforms made(made改为make) students feel like members in(去掉in) a big family.I like my uniform.How(how改为what) about you?
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