第一句中,toward应该是towards
第二段第六句中people应该是people's
可以写为
What's more,the progress of the society is based on everybody's/everyone's unceasing effort.
其它很好
第一句中,toward应该是towards
第二段第六句中people应该是people's
可以写为
What's more,the progress of the society is based on everybody's/everyone's unceasing effort.
其它很好