More and more middle school teenages/students are starting to use internet .
Advantages of using internet .
1 .Internet is a new path for students to gain their knowledge from .They can always surf the net when they meet any difficulty in their school works ,such as projects .
2 .Internet get so convenient that we can even buy things we want through the websites ,without stepping a step out .
3 .Internet had also connected us with people all around the world .We get to interact with them ,be friend with them and even learn their culture from them .This would gain our knowledge to the coutries .
On the other ,Internet could also be dangerous .
Disadvantages of using internet .
1.Due to long period of using internet ,some teenages are so use to internet the virtual world and couldn't adjust back to the reality world and cause problem like ,become very quiet and cant speak for themselve(cause they can just type out what they wanted to say while using internet .) ,this could give them a hard time to blend in to the reality world again .
2 .Some of them are addicted to online games or other things that are online for example,online novels ,and couldn't concentrate on their studies .
In conclusion ,even though internet may be harmful to us but as long as we use it appropriately ,it can be very helpful to us .
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