初步看了下,里面错误太多,估计是把中文用翻译工具翻成了英文,很多不通顺的地方,建议你把中文粘贴上来,我们来帮你翻译成英文.
第一段写的还可以,修改后是这样子的：
It is really my great pleasure that you can spare your precious time to read this letter.
I would like to apply for the position, I believe that my over two-year's hard working would qualify me with the qualification of dealing with challenges in the daily work.Following is my resume for your reference I'm looking forward to your further contact.
Thank you very much for your concern and attention.
Working Experiences：
职位:广汽日野汽车有限公司采购部设备科 采购员 2008/07 –2009/10
职位描述:
负责购入工装夹具和生产设备,对供应商厂家的报价、规格书的确定,制作标书等管理.以生产计划为基础,对原材料、货期、样品、质量、规格、型号的确认.在质量相同的情况下,为公司节约成本,品质发生问题和厂家联络,跟踪处理直到最后.与供应商联络、技术交流,对于异常情况的确认和处理.
Position: Purchaser, Purchase Department of Guangqi Hino Co.Ltd July,2008 - October,2009
Position Description:
As a purchaser, I was responsible for the purchase of jig and fixture and production equipment, confirmation of the quotations and specifications of suppliers, and management of biding documents. I also must confirm the raw materials, delivery date, samples, quality, specification and type based on production plan. When the quality is about the same, I would save cost for our company and if there’re quality problems and manufacturer contact, I should contact with the manufacturer until the matter is solved. And meanwhile, I should contact with the supplier for technical exchanges, confirm and deal with the abnormal situation.