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  • 文题:A person who helped me a lot

    正文:For me,school life is one of the best parts of my life.The most important reason is that I have many friends in school.

    My best friend is Tom.He is a boy with short black hair.He has many hobbies like swimming,playing soccer and telling jokes to his classmates.He is smart,friendly and helpful.

    I often shared my joys and sorrows with him and he always listened to me carefully.

    As we all known,a friend in need is a friend indeed.Two month ago,I got injured in the basketball match.He came to the basketball court immediately.Quickly ,he took me to the hospital.Because of my hurted leg,I can't go to school.He went to the hospital everyday and didn't mind spending his time helping me study lessons.

    I'm very happy that I can have such a good friend.I’ll value our friendship forever.