第一句没问题 加感叹号
第二句 very sunny very后面跟形容词
第三句think 用过去时thought 把 of去掉
第四局将museum前加个a 或者the
最后一句： I thought today of mine is funny.
老外听得懂
但是错误真多...
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大家来评评我这篇英语日记!What a happy day today.I went to the mountains.
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