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Twenty years ago,everyone watched spring festival gala on CCTV on New Year's Eve.On the other hand,nowadays,as the prosperity of our society grows,there is an increase in the use of computer,telephone and TV.Watching spring festival gala on CCTV on New Year's Eve is not the only option anymore.So it's a debateable issue,whether we should watch spring festival gala on New years Eve on CCTV.
Some people hold a postive attitude that watching spring festival gala on CCTV is a tradition.It is a sweet memory for most people.However,there are people who insist cancelling watching it on TV,as they think that it's out.
As far as I'm concerned,cancelling spring festival gala on cctv is not wise.Without spring festival gala on CCTV means forgetting memory and tradition.In contradiction,when you and your family watch spring festival gala on CCTV,you will happily discuss about it.Knowing spring festival gala on CCTV step by step,you will fall in love with it.