One afternoon my father and (went) fishing on a riverside .We found the water was (so) dirty that we could not see (the) bottom.We saw some rubbish (and) (dead) fish floating on the water (as) well .That afternoon ,my father and I caught only a (small) fish .Why did fish in the river die That was because (delete the "of" here) a lot of factories along the river always poured (its) waste water (delete the "at" here) and rubbish into the river .In this way ,the water got (polluted).Thus,most of the fish in the river was killed.
there you go,i kindda fixed that for ya...
you know,if i were you,i'd dump that article in your teacher's face and tell him not to misguide his students anymore.the whole writing's pointless and sounds totally like Chinese...
i can't believe the teacher choose such garbage as students' homework...
真的,这文章太坑人了,哪有这么说话的啊,简直不说人话嘛.给孩子留作业起码弄个正规英文读物啊,这样的东西读多了还怎么学正经英语啊.