My car is the same as his, but it’s price isn’t the same as his
这句有问题,it's price 应该和his car's price比较,省略了car's price,总觉得是it's price 和his price在比较,直接改为but the price isn’t the same.就舒服多了
even though we both bought from the same factory, but I bought it later 2 years than he.
这句也有问题,
①英文里,两个分句只能由一个连词连接,因此though 和but是不一起用的,正如because和so不一起用一样.
②bought后面缺宾语,buy做不及物动词是比较少见的,例：If you're thinking of getting a new car, now is a good time to buy..这句改为被动更好：they both were bought from the same factory..
③later 2 years than he 改为two years later than he ..