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Nowadays,cellphones become popular among students.
现在,手机在学生中间流行起来
Some students think that it is convenient for students to keep in touch with their parents by cellphones.Besides,sending short messages and making a phone call have become an important part of their daily life.
一些学生 为学生有机会便于同父母联系.此外,发短信或打电话也是日常生活所需要的.
However,every coin has two sides.Others think the cellphone has bad effects .Some students listen to the music on cellphone at class.What 's more,they play games and send message to their friends whenever they like
然而,每件事都有正反面.其它的则认为手机有不好的一面.一些学生上课用手机听音乐.此外,还有一些学生随意玩游戏发短信.
In my opinion,students can have their own cellphones ,but they should use their cellphones properly.
我认为,学生可以有手机,但要正确使用.
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