Dreams,
we all have a dream inside us,more or less.I think the most important factor
in realizing one’s dreams is experience.As we grow up,we are expose to many
things,joy,success,stress and lot more.When we are little,we always live
in uncertain.We are scare of the future,we are afraid of the unknown.
However,when we finally grow up and go through
all sorts of joys and sorrows of life,we would find
out what we truly wanted inside us.Not just an act on impulse but a decision that
we make and we would take responsibility of.Therefore,I think experience is
the key factor to know what one’s dream are.
Like I said in the first paragraph,experience is what make us grow .I think part-time jobs is an opportunity for us to expose to the society and to gain experience.We can learn many things from part-time jobs.There are things we are able to get from part-time jobs that we can't get it from anywhere else.
Toward failure,I think this is something we all go through before.It is always said that "failure is the mother of success".I think failure would make us mature.As we grow up,we learned and often from failures.We learn from what we did wrong and try to do better the next time.Therefore,I think if we can overcome failure,see failure as a motivate to do better then failure would be a stepping stone of our success.
可能长了点,你自己减吧.（ps：语法可能有点问题）