last week ,i visited my hometown.i left it when
i was nineteen years old.until then i had never （until改为since）
visited it.the village is near to saharanpur.i went(去掉to)
to saharanpur by train.from there i took an bus.my (an改为a)
uncle was waiting me at the road side when i got(waiting后加for)
off.i also met several other member of the family.it was（member改为members）
so a hot day that i took a bath.then i visited the farm,(so改为such)
where i milk the cow for the first time.i stayed there（milk改为milked）
for several days.when i was about to leaving,many people(leaving改为leave)
came to see them off.i was very impressed by this visit.（them改为me）