For looking for the new rich mineral resources, through the formers’ achievement in research, meticulous survey of the field and geological data collected in past years, we have recognized that, the generating of the 91# mine is the best combination of source, transport and storage in the Dachang super sized tin deposit.
have recognized that的宾语从句 需要 改一下 不改的话 把that 后面的逗号去掉
Metallogenic materials are mainly derived from crustal magma hydrotherm remelted. The main ore-controlling conditions are the structure characteristic and the surrounding medium. We obtained good prospecting results through this idea of mine prospecting work.
这个方式状语through this idea of mine prospecting work.有问题
简单改就是by using the idea of .
This indicates 有问题 this后面 不能用复数名词 that 最好改为 of 或 including
the timely discovery of a new geological phenomenon, the renewal of thoughts and a correct understanding of the known ore bodies are very effective for improving the prospecting result.
It is further illustrated 这个地方加that the peripheral and deep area of old mine have great prospecting potential.
没有大的语法错误 个别表达 需要 再斟酌
供参考 祝进步