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  • Dear Wang Ping,

    Your problem is∧common one among middle school students. Maybe the following advices can help

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    you. First in all, believe in yourself. Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence. The first thing

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    you must do is to smile at your classmates. One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than

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    any word. Your smile will show that you are friendly to him . Next, trying talking with a student who is as

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    shy as you or who share the same interest as you. You can discuss your studies with a classmate but you

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    can also talk about your hobby as well. Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her.

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    Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly .

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    Yours,

    Lily

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