1.i 当单词讲,要用 大写 ,即 I ;
2.时态用过去时,greet 应 改成 greeted;
3.语序不清晰,逻辑不通顺.逻辑连词 and,but 用法不准.
建议修改如下:
They were college students traveling in Beijing and most of them were fond of Chinese culture.
So I greeted to them in English.
句意:他们是在北京旅游的大学生,并且多数人都热爱中方文化.于是,我就用英语给他们打招呼.