March 28, 2010
Dear editor,
I’m sorry to occupy your precious time , but I really want to tell you something about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays.
I consider the problem more and more serious for the following reasons. First of all, as is known to people, pets make too much noise that troubles residents a lot. What’s more ，it’s widely accepted that animal wastes pollute the environment which makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking their pets to public places where they may frighten children or even sometimes bite people. The most important is that pets can spread some diseases and this has attracted much attention.
Taking all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media to do something for this.
Yours truly
wang lin
这是一篇以提纲写建议信的作文。信的开头结尾已经给出，只要写出正文就行，要点已经很明确，反映目前滥养宠物的问题。重点也很突出，有5个要点，只要把各个要点加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，适当运用复杂句，如as is known to people, pets make too much noise that troubles residents a lot.和 it’s widely accepted that animal wastes pollute the environment which makes people quite uncomfortable.但要注意，文章必须加上一些关联词是文章更通顺。