One possible version:
Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there came a kind or language called Web language.
Some people even speak Chinese mixed with English words. This is a phenomenon worth thinking about.
40% of the sutdents think it kind of ridicalous. In their oninions, it makes no sense in helping people communicate or learn English. Besides, it ia against the Chinese grammer rules. However, 60% of the students are fond of this way. They appreciate its humour. They think it of special help in expressing themselves, And it can make the language varied.
Personally, I don’t think it good to use this kind of language. It may be fashionable as some people think, but you may also get your idea confusing, leaving other people at a loss to your meaning.
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