Question

最好8级水平帮我改一下哈 语法错误和拼写错误After a well-rounded study,I know that

Answer 1

I know sense of responsibility and carefulness is significant建议改成I know the importance of responsibility and carefulness

they must take on responsibilities and be careful建议删掉,因为前面已经提到过了,单词重复显得累赘

I am looking forward CGA建议改为I am dreaming of CGA

文章总体来说写的不错,做些小小改动就可以了~