OK了吗?
I went to the Forest Park with my old friend this Thursday.Although it was hot,we had a wonderful time there.We played a lot,such as corsair,bumper cars,Arabian Flying Blanket and so on.We felt excited indeed.That day was also my friend’s birthday.I bought a comic strip for her because she likes cartoon very much.She also invited me to her new flat to play.At last she gave me a heart made of crystal.She really moved me.
On Sunday afternoon our translating group had finally finished all chapters!I was really excited.Although our translation was not very fluent and nice,even a little abrupt,it was our outcome.It was our effort.When I saw my name on the heroic translator list,I was really proud of myself.（原来我看过?我真的是不记得了）
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On Monday I went to school for the second learning.The weather was still very hot.But I was ready to face with my lessons.
This Saturday the typhoon came.It was really terrible.My father said that a pillar fell down when he was driving,and it nearly fell onto his car.It was really dangerous.But this Saturday my journalist lesson began and I had to go to the Youth Culture Communication Center (near Shanghai Railway Station) to have classes.I had to go out!The wind was really heavy.And I nearly couldn’t walk!Many trees collapsed and when I arrived there,I was late.But I was surprised to find that there was only about 10 students.Our teacher said just now on an art lesson,only two students came.The typhoon was really horrible.
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On Monday the typhoon had gone.Luckily it was not hurricane.And it had only been here for 2 days.Also after this typhoon,not many people lost their lives.
On Saturday I finally finished my second learning.Some students were very happy because we finished all summer learning.But some students sighed because of the heavy homework.I wasn’t sad an