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I will never forget my teacher Miss Li,who (is改成was) my English teacher when I was in high school.Miss Li was (younger改成young),pretty and kind-hearted.(That改成It) is hard for me to describe (how改成what) she was like.However,she really had her own personalities.She had us elect our monitor and (decided改成decide) where to go for an outing.Besides,she liked to have us (solving改成solve) problems (by改成on) our own.And we (took改成made) great progress quickly in our studies.It wasn't long before (去掉the) most of us behaved properly because we found her a good friend who we could depend (加入on).
1.后面有明显的过去时间状语从句,所以也用过去时
2.前后无比较（后面两个形容词也是用原级）
3.只有It才可以做句子的形式主语
4.like是介词,其后加代词what,而how是副词,不能做介词like的宾语,且：what...be like = how...be
5.和前面的elect并列,都用动词原形,做us的宾语补足语：have sb do sth 让某人做某事
6.have sb do sth 让某人做某事；have sb doing sth 让某人一直持续做某事
7.on one's own = by oneself 独自
8.make great progress 取得巨大进步
9.most of us 前面无定冠词the
10.depend on a good friend（depend是不及物动词,不能直接加宾语）
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