谢谢帮我检查一下作文《New Year`s Res

谢谢帮我检查一下作文《New Year`s Resolution》

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倒数第二句和倒数第一句换一下位置,倒数第二句是总结的句子.Finally就不要动了,改为“ Finally I will learn writing with my left hand during the next year.I hope our lives becomes more and more happily.”.
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划横线的地方是语法错误.（已经帮你改过来了^_^）
另外,缩写符号是“'”,例I'm zdlpt.
整篇文章写得不错,继续努力!(^o^)/